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Production: Peer Review; Did you like it?


Hey Gems. We're friends right? And friends are honest with each other. That's what today is about honesty. Today if the day of feedback and not from me. Yup, that's right someone else is review the film before I do. I know it's weird but it's happening. 

The film was reviewed by a friend of mine. She is also very honest. So having her review the movie is honestly a great idea.

First and what I think to be the most important feedback she has given us the run time of the movie. Our film was over time by several seconds. Her suggestion to cut certain scenes (check next blog) to reduce the length of the movie.

Next to increase the size of the title of the film. She said it got lost with the other titles. It did stick out. Which was true so the size was increased to be bigger than the other titles in the opening sequence but also not being to distracting from the actual movie.

Well Gems there you have it. A review that isn’t my own. But best believe mine is coming real soon. You just gotta wait for it. In the meantime time keep shining.

Sincerely,

Makenna Jewels <3


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